Music Piece - The Twilight Zone Reimagined

So I'm recreating the title sequence for the Twilight Zone in my film class, and I decided I'd go a bit further and recreate the music intro myself. It's just a rough draft I threw together in an hour, but I like where it's headed. I probably won't have time to edit it any further, so it'll probably stay the way it is.

I started with the original high-tone notes, then just added on from there. I added the pizzicato violins, followed by the assortment of trumpets and trombones. The alien sounding lead was something that just came to mind, although after finishing it, it sounds an awful lot like a Twilight Zone/Doctor Who crossover. But I think it still fit in pretty well. Close enough.